Haiku*
on a windy night
the fir tree agrees with him
on a windy night
*after hundreds of haiku, I think I've come up with my own unique style. Basically, L1 and L3 are identical however L3 has a subtle difference in connotation in light of L2. I've done it before in another haiku:
the little lizard
does push-ups on Spring concrete
the little lizard
on a windy night
the fir tree agrees with him
on a windy night
*after hundreds of haiku, I think I've come up with my own unique style. Basically, L1 and L3 are identical however L3 has a subtle difference in connotation in light of L2. I've done it before in another haiku:
the little lizard
does push-ups on Spring concrete
the little lizard
posted by Philip at 1:12 AM
2 Comments:
Hi Phillip, long time no see. Wanted to let you know that there is a blog that offers up a prompt once a week to write Haiku.
One Deep Breath has lots of poets participating.
Hope you are doing well. :)
thanks buddy
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