Tuesday, September 12, 2006

Berkeley's Door

passing unfamiliar roads
on the distance a green light
tints the stop sign

It smoked

1 Comments:

Blogger David Kopp said...

YYYYYYYYYYYO! Well done homie! Enjoying the brevity of it all. My favorite I've read so far is the gladiator/pillow one! I might take off that all your Hiaku are 5-7-5 cause is'nt that the definition of a Haiku? My only criticism! Keep in touch. my myspace is www.myspace.com/davidbkopp
PEACE MAN!

September 14, 2006 3:48 AM  

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