Haiku*
briefly our eyes meet
she is just too beautiful
blue linoleum
briefly our eyes meet
she is just too beautiful
blue linoleum
*for a long time I considered this to be the best haiku I've ever written.
posted by Philip at 1:07 AM
Friday, July 07, 2006
About Me
- Name: Philip
I discovered haiku in the summer of 2004 while browsing poetry forums. Since then I kept a little journal of my haiku and in winter of 2005/6 I started other writings i.e.- short story, prose, and poetry. All my writing essentially centers around haiku. All my haiku are 5-7-5 syllables.
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3 Comments:
"you should warn people that haiku are scratch n' sniff!"
lol thanks for reading man
-phil
you know its weird, this one is my favorite too.
i love it!
i really like this one.
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