Haiku
like winter water
her toe darts from the asphalt
a solid red hand
like winter water
her toe darts from the asphalt
a solid red hand
posted by Philip at 8:42 PM
Monday, April 17, 2006
About Me
- Name: Philip
I discovered haiku in the summer of 2004 while browsing poetry forums. Since then I kept a little journal of my haiku and in winter of 2005/6 I started other writings i.e.- short story, prose, and poetry. All my writing essentially centers around haiku. All my haiku are 5-7-5 syllables.
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4 Comments:
This is one instance where I strongly feel that breaking the 5-7-5 convention would be nicer:
winter water
toe darts from the asphalt
red hand
COME TO THINK OF IT:
winter water
darting toe
red hand
I like the last one the best.
Your are Excellent. And so is your site! Keep up the good work. Bookmarked.
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