Noticed her hair
and wished that she would turn around
and wished that she would turn around
and wished that she would turn around
and wished that she would turn around
posted by Philip at 9:02 PM
Saturday, February 25, 2006
About Me
- Name: Philip
I discovered haiku in the summer of 2004 while browsing poetry forums. Since then I kept a little journal of my haiku and in winter of 2005/6 I started other writings i.e.- short story, prose, and poetry. All my writing essentially centers around haiku. All my haiku are 5-7-5 syllables.
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3 Comments:
I like it and I don't like it... I wish there was either one more line, or one less, it's in this strange limbo mode that just lacks some sort of balance.
Nice! Where you get this guestbook? I want the same script.. Awesome content. thankyou.
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Great site loved it alot, will come back and visit again.
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